You have a ton of these "I’ll"...you might want to do some editing. :)

this is one of those poems that make me sick to my stomach...*wishes I hadn't read it* if you managed to do that, you know your an awesome writer! keep up the good work!

Wow, this is amazing and so freakin' sad! So powerfully written, awesome poem!

That was sad, I hope it wasn't true.

Ahhhhh this was off the hook babes where on earth did you get this idea from firstly...secondly thank the good Lord this aint true babes DAMN...great write tho hun unique topic and it grabbed my attention - glad to be back :o) Eirisa your bigga titta :o)

Surely a great write but thank the lord it isn't true....
love ya, Ann