Comments : I wonder if you know...

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully written...capturing what so many of us go through in our lives as we deal with our demons. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    No I didn't know, but i do now ;o)

    thanks for the education, and the blissful whiling away of the time spent reading this.

    well done

  • 18 years ago

    by James

    WOW... Melissa That was an excellent poem and well written Just Beautiful wish I could write like you :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow, this is awesome. I love the second stanza, just beyond words.
    This carries such intense undertones, truly mind boggling.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Enjoyed this write! awesome as always..keep up the good work!