Beautifully written, flowing and lyrical. excellent, keep it up

Omg it's so f ucking amazing...I love it so,sossososososososososososos much....I'm breath taken.

Thanx for your comment...your hug is returned.

*the broken butterfly

Thats really good... kinda like how i feel

Excellent poem, I love the different kind of words you used in it. It had a good flow. Keep up the good work.
Bec xx