Comments : A Mermaid's Tears (part 1)

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    Thank you so much for your comment, it means a lot to me. and amazing job on 'the little mermaid' kind of poem. it was great! ... i loved that show when i was little, and just getting reminded of it, makes me happy :) child hood memories are the best, thanks for reminding me!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a t0uching piece beautifully written. great use 0f w0rds. very well written. keep up the amazing w0rk and thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t t0 me!

    l0ve always d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    My god this is amazing, endlessrapture was correct with the comment, your words are absolutely breathtaking, theyre so unique and amazing wow hun, you are such a precious poet dont ever stop writing. xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow very good... liked it alot cant wait for the next part, well I know the story but u said a darker side, so now u got me wondering.... good job!!! lolz

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda

    Ur poem is awesome!! It's such an inspiration!!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow.......enough said jsut keep up teh gorgous workl!! :) PLEASE READ AS MANY OF MY STUFF S YOU CAN....Thnxs

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by bethan

    Thats a real good poem with lots of meaning to it...well done

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow this is a great poem. endless rapture is right u have a great way with words. can u twell me when u have the second part of this written? thanx. take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayli

    Keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow that was good! I love that movie!!!

    CK

  • 18 years ago

    by CoxfaceTM

    Omg that is soooooooo good....i love it....if i had more...it would be like 5 thumbs up

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Cool!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow this poem is awesome
    its so powerful
    i hope i can be just as good
    one day!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *Brie*

    Great Poem...there is no way to explain the feeling that I got when reading some of your words it actually made it feel as if you were the mermaid like you knew what to feel in this poem. Very Well written 5/5 good job I hope you will be reading some of my stuff :) as I will be reading more of yours!!!*

    *Brie

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    Hey, this one nice.. i like it alot.. i like the way you linked the stanzas.. keep your good job :)