Pretty good, nice imagery. good write!

Awesome poem. i like the style. =)

thank you for the comment on my collaboration poem, i really appreciate it. i haven't written anything for such a long time, and i needed that write. and i'm thankful to Lisa, because it was her idea.

thanks again, and keep up the awesome work. =)

-Britt

Tis interesting to say the least i think.. as usual, great word usage and expression of emotions... also the concept of the poem is well put.

Wow...a cool horror story could be made out of this creature lol....I really enjoyed it..great job!