Hey i like it a lot..is it from experience?? like you being a mum or something? cause it sounded sorta like it. Well done, and i think the length was fine. - Cara

It made me cry, i loved it! it reminded me of a story i once read. i need to wipe my tears, well good job.

Sad. sad. sad. sad. sad. excruciatingly painful to read, yet, the beauty and the truth of it draw you in. i also wrote about abortion, although its much more gruesome... and its not done with a doctor. abortion is killing.... thanks dear, for telling everyone. you write such breathtaking powerful words from a baby's point of view. you are one true loud voice in a room full of deadly silence and lies.

Ohhh my gosh...this is so so so saddd! i am seriously crying now, this is so damn good. job well done! if i could give u 10 i would, seriously. take care.

Stacy

A very sensitive t0pic l0t 0f em0ti0n in this very t0uching. g0od j0b 0n it th0ugh darl

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OMG... thank you for letting me see abortion through the eyes of the child, it helped me relise how painful and wrong it is to kill something you have created, i now never want an abortion... thank you so much xoxox CrAzY xoxox

It was good i liked it a lot keep writing

Oh my god i loved this...well mama...u r alwayz like sad when it comez to this topic and i understand where u comin 4rm...but u gotta b strong...i love ya ....byez

Oh I was so moved by this poem that I got tears in my eyes. It was truly good. Great poem. :)

This poem is very good it can open some peoples eyes

Omg that was a really good poem!!!i loved it love camille

5/5 it was really good i like it. it really opend my eyes more then ever i know i would never get one but just to think about that damm peole really do lose something good

That was excellent! I almost started crying..good job

Fantastic poem, it hits home for me, i have a 5 week old daughter, her father wanted me to abort in return for me keeping the baby against his will he hates me and doesnt want anything to do with us, he still has not seen her and doesnt want to.
i look at her now and it breaks my heart to no that he wanted to kill her!
if u r intrested read my poems on the situation with my babys daddy.
once again great work, brings tears to my eyes.
shelly 5/5