Comments : The Loss Of Love

  • 19 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    It was cute....until the end were it says I hope one day I'll feel the love you can bring. it left me hanging!! i think that you could of added just a little bit more to this poem!! keep up the good work! =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    It was cute....until the end were it says I hope one day I'll feel the love you can bring. it left me hanging!! i think that you could of added just a little bit more to this poem!! keep up the good work! =)