Awww how cute. I think the one line is supposed to say The sound of you(r) voice that never lies. Good job!

I love this poem because it seems so perfect for Valentines Day! You did a great job with the flow and kept it steady.
Keep on writing,
xoxo.

Awe what a sweet poem! I loved it sweety, it's fantastic! =) Beautifully written. Well done sweety, love you -xxx-

The rhyme and the rythme is so good... again good poem

This one is good too. i liek the way you explain exactually what makes you feel this way. i hope that if this is about a special person that you stay together forever. if it is not about a special person i hope you find the one who makes you feel this way.

Yet again another great poem... you really have a way with showing your emotion and expressing feelins.. good job.

I'm going to cry! This isn't about your ex is it? It's about the "new guy", right? I am so happy for you! Don't let this one get away. And tell him, if he messes wit you...I'll kick his *ss! Lol! I love you always!