Awwwwww, Banta, this was sooooo beautifully sad. How you could have come up with this I don't know. It is like so many of those stories about war, and it actually does happen. Which makes me sad. I love your poetry. Keep it up dear.

-eternally your friend-
Artimis

Great job dude. This is an excellent poem. NOt what I expected but it's really great. 5/5
-Vino

Great job dude. This is an excellent poem. NOt what I expected but it's really great. 5/5
-Vino