I agree with satin.. whoa that sounds weird. well anyways keep writing

Deep and meaningful... A beautiful, loving write Bill :)

This is so beautiful.......lovely way of expressing

brilliant job dear.....
take care

Bharti

OHH! This women must be special.. amazing! Just amazing! There needs to be more men like you in this world.

Hey i love all ur poems 5/5 on all of them talented

Great poem very intense very nice excatly how i feel for the man I love :-) I love it