Comments : One Night and Forever

  • 18 years ago

    by Krete

    What an incredible mood. The piece's powerfull serene ambiance, it just gushes like a flame - yet burning so still, that it never flicks or chymes out of its flow.

    This poems powerful satisfying birth of being laid to rest ... it trips on the tips of your tongue, and glides down - like comfort to all the fear and anxiety.

    Its so simple, and its message quivers up and down the spine. As the stars dim to the closing of the windows around them ... her soul; all the poet desires is one night ... thats all thats needed...

    Its like not sleeping, but writing within a dream.

    5/5