Very well written peice.

5/5

Hi there and welcome to P&Q. I can tell that you are going to do great by reading your first poem that you have posted. Great job and you display such an awesome talent. Keep up the good work and if you have any questions please feel free to shout.

--Sherry Lynn

A truly great message for today's world. We seem to have all forgotten the honor, discipline, and respect of the Samurai, and as such, this was a great idea. The only thing that struck me as something that could be imporved would be flow. It seemed a little choppy in the beginning. Strong point at the end was moving.

Umm Nice poem ^^' Are you.. mini-me? O_O COOOL!! hahaha I'm only kidding with you :P Good job ^_~