I silence the gunshot
With the clap of my hands
My voice will drain the floods
And drench the sweltering sands

wow, that is just so amazing...ultimate stanza..u wrote it just so beautifully
right in my fav list u go with that one
5/5

HOLY COW!! I have nothing else to say...words cant say how well youve done on that!!!

Hey.. this is reli nice.. i especially like ur last stanza.. pretty much summed it up for me.. gr8 job with this one..
i gave it a 5/5
take care
NannO

This is full of original and vivid images. The comparisons and ideas worked really well. The flow was good, however one line I stumbled over. Third stanza, third line I found to be rather wordy. I could almost say that for line four of the second stanza too because the similar sounding words so close together interupted the flow for me. That was just as I read it, it may well just be fine as it is. I enjoyed this very much, I admire the original and thought provoking tone it has.

I would post my favourite lines or stanza - but I would end up reposting your poem! That really is a very individual poem - and on a subject I've never read a poem about before. Great technique, and the imagery of the rainbow - full of colour and peace. Of course - you only ever get a rainbow when the rain is dissapearing and the sun appears :)

Peace. [Sole]

Hopeful poem and very well worded. 5/5

Amazing. Very well written! I loved it. This is full of imagery. Good Job.

~Joe~

I like your word choices here, 5/5