I like this alot..i think it has alot of meaning and can relate to alot of hurt people..
love cherish

I really liked your poem... I know how you feel. sometimes i feel the same way! Life's a game.. sometimes its unfair! I loved it.. keep it up!
xoxox
dAnielle

Emotional, i like it. good job!

:) x

Yea this is kinda what i'm saying in my poem " hidden feelings" i like yours too!

The poem has a lot of emotion in it and can pull the reader in. The only thing I found with it was the rhyming, there was no pattern and when you rhymed, repair, despair, hair, unfair, care and care together it kind of through me off. My other suggestion would be "quite" should be "quiet" butI'm sure you would have picked that up yourself :P
Also, I would eliminate the second to last line as it seems really repatitve, but that's just me. If you think it adds to the poem then leave it.
Overall this is a rather nice poem, a few finishing touches and it should be perfect! ^_^ It was a fun read and good write, keep writing keep smiling!