Something inside this person died, both literally and physically, and the shame and lonliness conveyed in this poem towards both the person and the child is just phenomenal. try and forget everything that happened... but it really never goes away, cause a part of this person died... very lovely. it's good to have you back.
-A

I really liked this. You have such a way with words... it's amazing. I can only hope one day I'll be half as good as you with expressing my emotions and thoughts. Great job, as always. :)

That was amazing....!!!!!!!!! Welcome to my favourites...Your writing and your expressing of words are totally amazing.....:) Gooooooooood job 5/5!!!

"But its time to talk,
play along,
forget about the baby,
who was robbed of his song. "

god youre amazing.

the flow is brilliant and utterly perfect. its a lament that just seems to scream with emotion and its as if there isnt even room for anger anymore. emotion is dead to anything mut mourning.
if i could give you higher than a 5 i would