Awwww how sweet....i felt this way about my now exbf....until he broke up wit me today(on vday!) who woulda thought.....just be careful about love bc it hurts a lot of ppl in the end...like me...excellent poem!!!...

~!Sandra!~

I like simple to the point very cute and very like able. nice job and keep it up 5.5

I wish a girl would write something like that for me. Right now, it doesn't look like the one I've been with all this time, won't give me those words soon. I really liked this one. Good stuff.

Lucky in love hey?? AWESOME!! Love is beautiful and sometimes it hurts...thats why we got to enjoy every moment while we have it!! Lovely poem. Hope your man appreciates it!
Sammib

I really like this it hits home good work

Im glad someone found true love and it was nice reading about it i loved it nice work love ayways Tina

LOVELY POEM

Aww this is so swet,,,i enjoyed this immensly..keep writing! UR rly good! 5/5!

Lissa xoxoxo

This is a very lovely poem may i make a suggestion if u take the words "and.but"out it will sound better just try it if u dont like if well then u dont have to do it but please look at it ok 5/5

Yeah a lovely poem a sweet explanation of your love and this one is better than the other i like this much