Comments : When she fell

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    How sad but beautiful, well done

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    Pretty good poem. hope u're ok!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    What a sad poem Steph. I loved every part of it and I can also relate to it. Which is good and bad at the same time.

    Loved it. It's kind of how I feel right now actually. God .. I just don't know what else to say. I could ramble a whole story about why I can relate to this poem... but all I really want to say is that it's a wonderful poem.

    Loved it sweety, it's right from the heart, and I know that. That's what makes it so sad...

    Hope you are ok hun, I love you

    -xxx- Lotsaa love

  • 18 years ago

    by lOVER

    Awwww such a beautifully tragic story, i loved it!
    really well done i liked it a lot!!

    thanks for commenting on a lot of my poems my sweet x)
    so i thought it was my turn to return the favour xP

    nice writing

    xx take care my dear

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautiful hunn.. Really love it!!:) Sass -xxxxxxx- luv ya

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Sad but still lovely.
    people never pay enough attention to what they have.
    but she shoulda said something.
    you never know unless you talk to that SOMEONE.
    neways 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Steph

    Thats beautiful. heartbreaking but beautiful. I can def relate to this too. i love how u can put it into words and make it sound so awesome. its amazing.
    take a look at some of my poems too maybe?:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Really and truely touching!!
    well doneh huni
    keep it up
    xxxx mwah xxxxx