Oh wow...i loved it so much. there's so much emotion in it. great job.

Great use of words, very well captured feelings here.. nice work!

Kinda creepy but very well written!! Great JOB!! :)

Wow awsome job.. I loved it it kinda reminded me of someone who is trapped within them selves and unable to escape their pain. nicely written thanx for your comments on my poems they mean a lot to me

This is such a good poem! It is very descriptive and emotive. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and it held up well.. My favorite part was:
The begging for release,
Echo though the corridors,
Bouncing off the white walls,
Heard far and wide,
Heard but not listened to,
those lines really stood out to me and gave a feeling of loneliness. Great job on this!

I like the beginning few sentences,and the middle one:But their screams are all but ignored.and the ending:Heard but not listened to,
No matter how loud they scream,
Here they will remain,
Trapped and never to feel.
The whole poem is good enough.

This was really good. But.. I'm not sure where these people are trapped. maybe if you explained where they are, it could be better. Enless you mean like people who have already passed. Either way it was a fantastic piece. Write some more, Cause I'm running out of poems that I can comment on lol. 5/5 =P

`taleee xx