Comments : Song of a lost soul

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...very intense poem...I like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Clown

    STOP CUTTING YOURSELF!!!!! JFC THATS F-ING STUPID!!! GDI NO MORE CUTTING!!!!! NOTHING, AND I MEAN NOTHING IS WORTH HURTING YOURSELF OVER!!!! I know you feel small, weak, and unimportant, I know the feeling, but on the contrary, when people treat you like sh-t its only cuz theyre jealous of you. to cut yourself is giving in to a society of ignorance from which your only escape is suiside, and trust me, there is a hell, its not a nice place and i would rather suffer the life Im living then to go back. Im not preaching, god still sucks, no doupt about that, but suiside leads to hell, and its not a fun experance. cheak out my 20 Minutes In Hell story, it tells you only a fraction of what happened wile I was dead, before the shocks brought me back.

  • 18 years ago

    by FASHIONISTA

    This is a very good poem! It is very dark and depressing thoughD= It really expresses strong emotions!

    vanessa.xxx