Lovely, very nicely written

Beautiful I loved it! the rhyming was pretty awesome... anywase.... AWESOME!!!

Aaah love it! xx

Awwe I love you and want you too Ryan. :P lol jk your like a brother to me.

Corinne

Hey really nice poem, but if this a true poem u really have to focus more on how she feels than how u feel, it will help later on.

Oh gosh. So sweet. I gave a 5. Mmhm. I liked it =)

You are my life
You are my soul
I want you forever
That is my goal

This almost made me cry =']

xx.N-G-C-S.xx