Goth, this poem is incredibley amazing. When I read some of your poems so far, I felt that I have the same thoughts that you have and I really think in some ways just like you.
well done friend, mashallah.
This was a very powerful poem and so sad it was too. the image in this poem got stuck in my mind. the pain was out of this poem. very word just blew my mind. it was amazing n unique. well for it was. I love it. Keep up the awesome poems.