Thanx...and ur work is extremely good 2....5/5

Thanx for the comment, you've got some pretty good talent too, keep it up

You pain this picture in my mind and not alot of people can do that. you have great talent never give it up. 5/5

You really have unique poems. All your ideas are new and different, nothing original. Great poem again as usual. Keep up the good work.

Thanks Goth for your comments. Your poem's great. Liked it.

Great poem. Well writ. Great imagery at the beginning. It really sets the mood for the rest of the poem. Its awesome. Honest Luck

Sarah

Goth, this poem is incredibley amazing. When I read some of your poems so far, I felt that I have the same thoughts that you have and I really think in some ways just like you.
well done friend, mashallah.

Love your work keep it up and dont let no one stop you of writing wonderful poems (^_^) 5/5

This was a very powerful poem and so sad it was too. the image in this poem got stuck in my mind. the pain was out of this poem. very word just blew my mind. it was amazing n unique. well for it was. I love it. Keep up the awesome poems.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy