All of your poetry is amazing. I can definately relate to this one. Reminds me of my scrawl on pieces of wrinkled, torn paper... I'm not too organized, then again, the best thinkers aren't. ^_^ [5/5]

All of your poetry is amazing. I can definately relate to this one. Reminds me of my scrawl on pieces of wrinkled, torn paper... I'm not too organized, then again, the best thinkers aren't. ^_^ [5/5]

Wow, this poem was simply fantastic! i love the way each stanza was so short, it almost seemed to imitate the way in which ideas flooded your head but couldnt be let out, and imitating small scarps of paper. I love the way you wrote the third stanza, it was really impressive.
Above all, i love the topic you chose, its something Im SURE many writers on this website can relate to and you conveyed it SO perfectly that this poem is about everyone who reads it. It was a real pleasure to read!

Wow, it's beautiful. I absolutely love it, especially the last stanza. I'd give it a 7/5 if I could.

By the way, thank you for the comment, much appreciated.

Kalika

Hey this is indeed a good poem, really liked it.

all the best and take care

Ah, I deffinately know that feeling!! When you can never get to the computer and all you have are 700 scraps of paper with bits and pieces of poems. Well done!! Take Care Now and Thanks For The Comments!
Amanda*