Comments : I will change

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel

    I know were you are coming from I really like this poem!!i gave it a total5

  • 18 years ago

    by SugarAngelz

    I no how it feels...gr8 job wiv da poem give it 10/10 ^.~

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    *hugs* dont say that... ur wonderful just the way u r. i wrote " A poem by a nobody" to show how bad perfection hurts. Don't do this, Elnaz. ur too good to rub off ur originality. life isnt worth living if it isnt life at all. dont ever break; that's what people want you to do. always stand up for what is right, not what is secretly wrong. dont corrupt yourself; youre too good to lose ur individuality. be who YOU want to be; you command your life. they get to choose who THEY want to be. i know shes ur mom, but shes probably going thru something. just know theres people who care about you besides your mom. like me. *hugs*

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Uh, yeah about my poem... why dont you get it, it seems simple? the line meant that i want to die with him, feel the same things-be with him for a long time. it just talks about how i want to be close to him. o i c about the last comment on the hard relationship thing. sry, get better? i no that sucks, but i feel like crap right now. later.

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Hi. lol.... ya.... she told me she just panicked n it wuznt a twister.

    well newayz... im looking for it in my binder rite now :)but its not in here :'( wrong folder!!!! amnit-day! well ne wayz ill just make up a new one :)