Comments : TO THE GRAVE

  • 16 years ago

    by Emy Mohammed

    Gamdaa gedan

  • 15 years ago

    by emiley

    Wow this poem is amazing! i really understand it. yay!! lol. xoxox

  • 15 years ago

    by robin milford

    I enjoyed this poem thanks for your comment on "Suicide note"

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    (EYE OF HEAVEN) (DREAD) (DUST) (IMMORTALITY ) (ROAR) (RED) (DAMN TREE) (SUET)
    I am trying to see a pattern here. The eye of heaven dreads the dust of Immortality, So the roar of the red Damn Tree Suet. It works I guess. the first part I put together. for there is no human being on earth that is Immortal. If it were possible God would dread it, for all they would be doing is gathering dust. I am probably wrong and you are probably wondering what i am doing. I just feel that this poem has a puzzle that makes it deeper. lol.
    Nice write from poetry Knight