Gamdaa gedan

Wow this poem is amazing! i really understand it. yay!! lol. xoxox

I enjoyed this poem thanks for your comment on "Suicide note"

(EYE OF HEAVEN) (DREAD) (DUST) (IMMORTALITY ) (ROAR) (RED) (DAMN TREE) (SUET)
I am trying to see a pattern here. The eye of heaven dreads the dust of Immortality, So the roar of the red Damn Tree Suet. It works I guess. the first part I put together. for there is no human being on earth that is Immortal. If it were possible God would dread it, for all they would be doing is gathering dust. I am probably wrong and you are probably wondering what i am doing. I just feel that this poem has a puzzle that makes it deeper. lol.
Nice write from poetry Knight