That sounds like the story of my life, i just hope it doesnt have the same ending..... really nicely done! keep it up!
~Sami

This poem is so detailed!!! It felt as if I was the girl in the poem!!! I loved this poem though it was kind of scary! Keep Writing!

Heya your writing is amazing...it felt so real, like I was watching the girl. Tears fell from my eyes as I read it. It's really deep. Let me know when you have finished it x

That was really good. Please finish soon. it really feels like your part of the story (poem). keep it up

WOW> WOW>WOW>WOW, thats is amazing im completely speechless. This poem scared me soo much coz i pictured myself as the person in the poem. wow ! powerfull well dun xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Lets hope this isn't about you...
i've been there, just never with a gun.
no one really understands it,
until you're at that breaking point.
then they all seem to care.
if you wanna talk...
ell oh vee eex--AIM.

Awesome poem though

This is really good! u say ur not as talented but ur a natural! keep it up, u do really well! i like reading ur poems b/c theyre so full of emotion! keep writing!

WOW ur talented your a great poet you really are.
thats a great poem i felt like i was that girl i know i have never taken it that far in my life but i can relate so well that really is such an emotional peom and it can only be that emotional because you use such great detail its really descriptive....5/5 keep up your great talent i lok forward to read the finished version
take care
love paul xxxx

Hey.. that poem was really amazing... i would love to see it finished... i just couldnt stop reading..5/5.
-Sleeping Beauty
xxox

So tragic but theres good reality to it can't wait to read the rest!!

OMG PLEASE FINISH IT!!!!!!! it's sad but it is well writen. great job! 5/5 keep writing
~*Katherine*~

*5/5! really good..keep writing.. and dont 4get to finish it.. i wanna see it when finished..(H)let me know when it is.. haha...u r good..=)
--->anita xoxo!*

Sounds like my life too. it was amazing and it was so good i almost cried. i wish my poems were as good as this one. please write more.

I really like this i want to kno wat happens next ...i think you did a great job!! keep it up
im excited to read the rest!

Omg that poem gave me butterflies i cant stop reading it.. i can so relate really madd poem cant wait 2 read it again when its finished...take care with love JoSiE

I want to know if you are going to finish it because i really want to know what happens next

That was SO good! woah..im gunna go read part 2 now...im glad i didnt read it wen u 1st made it or id b in suspence! anyway 5/5 for sure! ~*Who Cares?*~

This is realy good it has so much feeling in it. its almost like im there is the shadows watching all this happen you are realy talented

Hey....my names clare...i think this poem is awesome!....im just gona read da 2nd part lol

Whats going on sis