That was good and keep it up . Thanks for adding that comment on my poem!

Well, I will give this a rating of 4 because I really liked it. I think
this part was very good:
And as they start their graceful descent
Delivering a message that heavens sent

and you did a good job on the beginning. I mean you started your
poem with describing the things around
you and this makes the reader imagine
things better. keep it up.
have a good day,
marjan