Oh, Tim this is awesome. I love it. It's an interesting storyline that you portray beautifully.
I also like how you ended it with the last 2 lines of the 1st stanza, very nice.
You always leave me wanting to read more....
Love ya~Holly

Awesome write Tim! Excellent as always.

Beautiful write T, such a sweet poem its a sad one but i still love it.

love lise

I really like this poem. It was very emotional. My favorite stanza was:
I can see through the lines in your face
Written in the corner of your eyes
Your life has traveled to many places
Hindered by the make-up you generously apply
It really stood out to me. I also like the last stanza.. It really brought the whole poem together and was a great way to end it. Great job on this!

Oo, this is really interesting. the way i'm reading it, the woman is the most beautiful at the end, when she's not trying anymore. it's a cool thought

First off, wow. But wow can not simply sum up a poem of this sort, but that is the only word that comes to mind. Just know, I really loved this poem. The lines that really captured me were...

"I can see through the lines in your face
Written in the corner of your eyes"

I loved them. They were truly amazing. They painted a picture in my mind. Keep it up. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

"The day when your mirror never lied
You were the fairest of them all"

Very impacting lines. Wow. I still can't get over that poem. Sadly, a lot of people go through this. A very good job at expressing it.

As always, Tim, it's a pleasure reading your poetry. Keep it up!

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

I loved the last stanza,very moving.very good rhymes.

Really powerful! And fantastic ideaa