Well this was a excellent poem man keep it up

Well this was a excellent poem man keep it up

Personally i really liked today will be my last , only i really hope it was JUST writing and not for real. luv ya

This is a great poem...just like in the Grim Reaper one...try putting it in stanzas instead of a paragraph...to me, i think it looks more organized that way but still....like i said this is a great poem..keep it up...

~!Sandra!~

This is an amazing poem...all of your poems are...i can feel the emotions well. 5/5
-lauren

Really great poem, I love it. Just hopefully you don't really feel this way. Attempting suicide is no picnic..5/5