Wow theres so much emotion in this
short lines n switching from 3rd 2 1st person have a great effect, nicely written!

In some way i found this poem powerfull. its full of confusion but thats wot love is. xxxxxxxxxxxxx

I like ur rhyming hunni its in tune, altho its sad it has sumting

thanks 4 sharing it wit me...

Its ok but try to work on ur ryming

Vee, rhyming doesn't have to be in all poems.

It was a little confusing, yes.. but I liked it.