'I hang my hands out of a running car
and fly every night in my dreams to you...
I stare at moon with an burning desire
hoping you are staring at it too

i admire every shining star
and make a wish when they fall
i scream with passion all night
and hope if you could hear my call'

Where were you hiding these deeply passionate words all these times? So glad to finally get a love poem out from your darkness. I finally see some light in there. Congrats....admired the original person but love the changed guy.

Lots of Love
Princess

Great Nitin!
even i feel wonderful to read ur love poems. this is a unique one from ur side. u have come over my expectations dear!!!!!
lovely poem with great rhyme. 5/5

take care
Bharti

Wow ... you've been hiding this side of yourself. It's so nice to see. Great job.

Hey Nitin,

Wonderful poem, once again you did a great job, where do you get ur inspiration? lol.

My favourite stanza is..

i admire every shining star
and make a wish when they fall
i scream with passion all night
and hope if you could hear my call

Beautifully written.

Woah this one was amazing it's definetly one of ur bests I can really relate 5/5 keep up the good work
xox
Kristen

You know what, we really need to talk...
What is up... from ' i'm so sad i can barely breath' to ' love is in every bit of my soul'... when did this happen??

i must say, i'm falling in love with your 'love' side.. hehe...

I hope you keep writing like this... 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

As I am on my 3hr break, thats how I got so much time to comment on your poems. I couldnt help but to comment on this as well. Its such a sweet poem, after an eternity of dark clouds I finally see a rainbow in you. :-)

Love
Michelle

Nitin
What a beautiful poem of love you have penned.
Excellent job.
Love Cindy