I see real talent...nice job...all of your poems are so sad...i hope this isnt the way you feel...im a great person to talk to and stuff...if you ever want to talk about anything email me at purplefroggychic@yahoo.com and you can share your feelings....its just that i dont like to see ppl sad...it makes me sad even if i dont kno that person i will talk to them =] its just the way i am...i care a lot about ppl...remember im here to talk if you ever need to...if you really feel this way you describe in the poems i mean... great job tho...

~!Sandra!~

Its good keep it up

Awesome!!!! i love it!!!!

Love this one.. know how it feels.. it is a good poem! and thank you for commenting on my poem. xx A.

Good poem man keep it up

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i love the way you write .. i just can't help but keep reading ..and comment! ..your doing and awesome job here duuuude! k33p it up eh!
you write with such power and emotion ...W0W!

Nice poem Tormentedsoul its so good i can picture it like it Comment back-Liz

Another awsome poem! good job

Awesome poem! I can really relate to this. Keep up the good work, and thanks for commenting on my poem!

Usually i don't like free verse but this is awesome. You're a very good writer. Keep this up