I really liked this poem and i really liked how the poem flowed, great job!

That is amazing
keep it up
thanks for posting on mine :)
good work

Thank you for the comment on my poem I like your somes. keep it up.....BYE!

So powerful
because it can be so true!
i think alot of people will be able to relate to this
i love it
well done huni keep it up!!
lovies ya xxxxxxxxxxx

That is sooooo brutally honest...hard to hear, but very necessary to share....i loved it keep writing...thx for the comments...
love ya lots,
sore

Hmm wonderful poem Steph. Loved it alot!

Amazing how you can write so many examples of things/situations/people that are forgotten.

Great job. Well done sweety. Proud of you =)

Love you!
-xxx-

Fantabastically awesomeness poem!
5/5
the reason that poem i wrote was so short was because i wrote it in two minutes. so yea, thats why lol. but thanks for the comment i appreciate every one that i get.

IMMAfallenANGELtryingTOfindMYway

Hey Steph, Loved it... Keep on writing, your good.
Jessy
xx

Dude, i love this poem. you know. you're a good writer. and this poem would make an awsome song. would you let me make it into a song?

0_o caught myself reading this again. It's just so wonderful hun =) I love your writing so much. I can't wait till you write something new again !

Your comments mean the world to me. A poem doesn't feel finished if you didn't comment on it. I love you hun !!!!!!

*kisses and hugs Steph*
=)

Good poem. 5/5, I like the use of repitition.

I really wish everyone in the world could take in poems meanings and change the way things are, but humanity is blind. o.o; Anyway:

If all your poems are this good [this is the first I've read so far ^^] then you'll have me hovering around in wait of more everytime. Just warning you.

Awsome job that poem must of took a lot of hard work but you definalty pulled threw great job

sarah xoxo

Hey Steph!
You keep saying I'm good.. but guess what!
Your WAY better! Keep up the great work!
Love ya lots,
Laura

The best thing about your poem is the way you've written it. It has nice flow... It's really good!

Wooooooooooooooooooooah
love the use of similies (cant spell it, sorry :P )

i realllllllly love this!! you're being added to my faves :)
keep it up!!
kat - xox

Awwe, I love it. You crutique my work very deeply.. I love that too. Good one girly :)