Comments : No one cares

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I kno how u feel sumtimes it like ur in a dream dn u just want sumone to come and pull u into reality...and the truth is even though in the poem you claim you "feel nothing" that jsut screams that you're feeling too mucch.

    It says that you arnt sure you liek who you are..teh world never takes tiem to get to know you..tehy jugde you even before they rly get to know you. They tell you you're someone you're not which makes it easier for you to do the same.

    Its liek when ur sleeping you can dream of other things..and not of this place that in a sense you feel trapped in. Dreams allow ur mind to wonder, so you cna change and invent who you REALLY long to become, instead of being forced ot becoem who the world labels you as.

    THis poem jsut screams..I WANT TO MAKE A DIFFERANCE . I WANT TO BE MY OWN PERSON< NO ACCUSATIONS JUST LET ME BE ME! I hear you...

    so i pray that peace can also be found when ur awake and stumbling to meet the needs of others and while the world tries to define you I hope that you in return, LEARN TO DEFINE IT.

    Things like friends which are undefinable make it in thise world, JESUS is undefinable...and He made it, so BUDDY keep relying on Him and He will look at you adn think abotu you and CARE ABOUT YOU.

    good luck, and a great piece WOW!

    Lissa