Comments : Don't You

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    OMG, this is so sad and emotional.
    I like the ending because it explains alot ...
    "So Don't you even try to help
    Cause you'll only make it worse
    Don't you try to pull me up
    Let me try to get out first
    Because my love for you
    Is only as strong as yours for me
    Which Dad, It isn't that strong
    That Much everyone can see

    So now you know how I feel
    Not like you'll ever care
    But hey, at least I tried
    But I can't make love appear"
    Well written, 5/5. Em