Hooray!! :D

I liked this, it explains alot.
But seriously, chose more creative names.
It will get you much more readers, and your poems are interesting.
Also, next poem try give it more meaning..I am looking forard to reading more of your work, watching you grow as a writer =-D

Lisa.x

I like the way you put your thoughts into poems but you really need to find some creative names for them. I hope you continue improving and such.
~Faith