Comments : Running On Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Sweet! Great work, Tim!

    Running on ice.. very good analogy!

  • 18 years ago

    by katie harvath

    Omg this was an amazing poem.. I loved it.. saying you did a great job on this is an understatement!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I love it! It's simply breathtaking. The flow is superb and the emotion on display through your enchanting words is mesmerizing. Keep it up....
    Love ya~Holly

    P.S. My favorite part is the last four lines.