Vrry insipring......niicely protrayed. Way to capture you're true feelings. keep it uip and please read some of my poems and i will do the same..thnxs

LISSA

Your poem is nice, its very powerful and i like it, you are a good writer god bless* xxxx

I really liked this poem! it spoke so much!! your great at this!! keep up the hard work!
XoOx molly
P.s. thanks for the comment!!

Awww...so sweet. I love the second stanza. Keep writing. 5/5

That's a really sweet poem! I like it, you're a great writer. Keep up the good work!
~ Kim