Comments : My Shallow Grave

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Thats a happy thought! nice poem though, well said but very very sad hun. your a very fast commenter woah nelly=) thankyou for it, keep up the great work

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    Hey, thanks for your comment, your a gr8 writer xx

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Thnx 4 the comment, i rly liked this poem. its v. imaginative and paints a clear picture in the readers mind. well done and keep writing!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Good poem. i like your wording. 5/5
    lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Hey I liked this poem. you did an awesome job on it. GO YOU! Bye!

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    Hey thanks for commenting....
    great poem
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Such a sad poem
    good, but sad

  • 18 years ago

    by Unity

    W0w!!! ... and you were saying my poems were powerful? i think you have it wrong because yours are .. this one is amazing!! ..really unique and different! i love it ...such meaning!

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...so excellent. so sad...but oh so wonderful. i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    Wow. i really like this one. it explains how im feeling right about now. thanks for my comments by the way

  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Great job!!!! my only thing is...try putting this in a stanza form or something like mine....it would really make this and your other poem i read (the last piece of my heart) look........a lil better and they would look longer....but hey this is only my opinon=] great job tho...

    ~!Sandra!~

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    This was a good poem, but the format is a little off at sometimes, along with the flow. Other than that it's pretty good. Keep up the good work, this is a very powerful piece of work.

  • 17 years ago

    by AnJolina

    Thats a really good poem!
    ~!ugly & unloved!~

  • 16 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    Wow i hope you have friends unlike this poem unless your a loner but thats cool to cuz people can get really annoying and hard to trust but good poem
    carly