Comments : Completing the Circle

  • 18 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    Really really good poem!! i liked it alot! great job

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    First off i wanted to thank you for the comment you left me on my poem, "Trapped Angel", telling me i have talent!? honestly, i read this work of yours, and i was like, wow, it was amazing! YOU have the real talent, there was absolutely nothing wrong. i enjoyed every word, from beginning to end...and like the shape of a circle, it when full throtle all the way around, and thats wat made it perfect. please keep writing, and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    *AntiSocial16*

  • 18 years ago

    by Valentin

    I now understand more y ur poems get published, they're incredibly awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem! wow hun..
    speahless xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Oh my gosh WOW!!! that is such an amazing poem, i absolutely loved it! brilliant writing hun :),
    take care,
    lots of luv xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow well i already commented but wow.
    that poem just blew me away again.
    This is the only thing that made the poem harder to read:
    "but none are there to find"-maybe but there are none to find..
    i thought the flow was easier.
    Anyway..amaizng poem..great writing keep it up xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Hey thanks for the suggestion, i will check it out!