Comments : All i want..

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    I can really feel the pain your going through in this poem... like you said to me "keep ya chin up girl, everything gets better"
    Just remember hun there is an up for every down!
    5/5
    Hayley-Ree xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by DANI

    :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    I could imagine this as a song...hmm do you write lyrics? cuz you're a very talented poet and u should mayb try it sometime...5/5