Aww its so cute...acctually i have no idea what it says
BUT
BUT
BUT
we can just pretend
5/5

Long but great poem actually my favorite so far...your vocab is amazing!and how old are you??15...or something I think I'd need to check again...You remind me of the poet Charles Bukowski.actually I'm in the middle of reading a book of selected poems from him and it is called Burning In Water Drowning In Flame
which I frst picked up because that was a lyric in a H.I.M. song....you should check it out.

Great poem. it was so diffrent. i really like your stylw of writing. nice job.
Emma 5/5

This is a good poem, i like the way you have written it

Pretty good, though I don't quite understand what this poem is getting at

Awesome Job. I loved it. You have an awesome style of writing. keep up the good work.

~Joe~

I love how in your poems you use intelectual vocabulary, it adds much more description. i enjoyed this poem and loved the way it was written.

Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura

Its such a great poem, love the style, and the words you use I dont know. Half of them I dont know what they say, buut they make the poem so much better. Really Nice Poem

Wow...mind blowing vocab like always! ^_^ i don't think i spotted a single bland word in there! =D lol...i really do need to change that word...hehehe...anywayz...terrific poem like always...great imagery...i loved it.

Ok again... you are so talented... this poem was amazeing... i really loved it... keep the talent