Comments : The Season's children

  • 18 years ago

    by Deaths Maiden

    I could feel the emotion amongst this poem and the description within the poem was well put.
    Well done and take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very beautiful. i adored it, as i do all ur poems. i feel my comments are getting repeptitive, however that is unavoidable when they are all perfect. congrats,
    Suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Timeless Hopeful

    This is really good, well done. I must say the season's are pretty popular topic...I even wrote one, but yours tops it...Lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    This Poem Is Very, Very Well Written and Very Fun And East To Read. It Flows Tremendously Well And Portrays A Wickedly Cool Message. I Think That The Seasons Being Called Children Brought Me Another Idea. It Would Be Cool If You Wrote About Their Mother (( Mother Nature )) In Maybe This Or Another Poem... A Sequel Perhaps? I Also Like dThis Poem Because It's Very Different Than Many Other Poems On Here.

    Great Write!
    ♥ Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    That poem paints such a picture! I'm really very impressed!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Fabulous, perfected once again.
    I like how your work differs everytime, instead of the same thing over and over.
    greayt
    Love
    ~Em

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Beautifully written, loved the vivid descriptions.. nice work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Welli cant really comment this since i have already// haha (CheRRy)

    xD

    but i shall comment 4 others.