Hi hunny.. u wrote an emotionally felt poem but its really sad and i hope everything is okay.. pls remeber that no matter what happens i'll always be here for u, i would nv leave u ever, stay strong ya?
lots of love,
lostlllsoul

The sheer amount of thoughts running through the head in such a small time really emphasised the sadness of the falling person
"On the edge of the roof i stand alone swaying.
Glancing down the street, seeing people assembling.
Now i feel myself slipping down in the air.
people down the street begin to stare.
"
I loved that bit
Keep writing :)

Wow that was intense and so well written, one of my favourites by far

well done x0x0