Oye, yeh to kaali shayari hai..yeh sab kaise hua...kahaan se socha yeh sab...tum mere ilaake mein mat ghusso..samjhe na.
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Silence is finally here
In my final resting place
Buried six feet under
With no look upon my face

this is just awesome, what on earth made u feel like that....this is ur first dark poem and its rock solid.
welcome to my club...lol

all the best and take care
5/5

This is simply superb.
Now in eternity of darkness
I finally see a ray of light
is very well written and so true of a life led by ignorance.

good luck and peace

shobhana

I love that! It couldn't be more perfect!

What can I say other than "oh my how this poem rocks my socks"! you've got talent keep it up - oh and by the way I've finished that poem you liked its called newly begun - anyways keep writing cos this is great 5/5 =)

Your poetry's amazing. Wow doesn't begin to cover it.

Lovely.......so touching and hearfelt....
good job Chavii......5/5

luv,
Bharti