That was awsome. I loved it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

This is good for a no ryhming poem great job hun

Yea I love this poem, its really good.

Wow.. this is amazing.. i absolutely love every single word in this.. im sorry u feel this way.. but ur ryt about it.. someone is always hiding some deep truth about themselves.. ur title is also captivating, but i think "The Girl.." cud work more with the topic of ur poem than "This Girl".. gr8 job..
ur gr8..
take care
NannO

Love it! Great write! If I may suggest... to add more punch and impact to the prelude of the latter part of the poem, try breaking this line up "I'm someone I myself resent" into serveral lines like this...

I'm someone,
I, myself
Resent.

Then start off "You can play..." in the next stanze to emphasize on the hidden reality. Of course, that's my own opinion. Great write though... keep writing. 5/5