Very lovely my dear.... so sad yet so lovely...
always,
-A

This one is very, very good. I was so excited to see you had posted another. :]

Thank you for your comment. I wanted that piece to be so much better... to reflect the way I've been feeling a little bit more, but those few lines were all I could manage.

My life is falling apart and I suppose I'm lost for words. I only wish I could write about the pain I feel inside. Sometimes I wonder what I'd write if I had your talent to speak my mind and heart. But, I guess, everyone has their own talents.

Great job. Excuse my ramblings. :]

Thank you, thank you, thank you! =] Your comment has helped me a lot... and after the day I just had, I needed that. Thank you once again!

Love it....its sad but i love it...keep writing...i love reading your poems:)
gread work:) 5/5

Hey, this is great. i love the last stanza especially :D