Really really good i liked it alot!!! awesome job!

I love it! you are a great writer.

Don't ever stop writeing you are great you write about stuff that has meaning not only to you but to the rest of the world

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Kacy E. Wentz

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Wow. this is so amazing. seriously. it gave me chills

I really, really like this. The ending was humrous in a sense just like the rest of the world... a really sad joke. Excellent job, I'm super surprised this poem doesn't have more comments or votes, cause it's AWESOME!

This is so true

I agree, you're a beautiful writer, even if its about something depressing like this.

This poem really is so great.
You're amazing with words, 5/5.