I love this poem, i guess I can relate. The way you used things in the room to sybolize emotions and sadness was very creative and I would say it's probably one of the best I've read in a while. You are a very talented writer.

This poem was really awesome! awesome job!

'and saw a mess holding up my roof' I looove this line. I have never thought about it that way before :p. this poems is very real. I love the way you used a room very original well done :p you have alot of talent for this keep it up the images you created were very vivid and sad.