Comments : My Pen and Paper

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    This flows so well...i really like this poem...plz comment back if u have time...*PL*

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    AHH YOU WROTE A POEM! ok where to start where to start?!!

    Ok right here
    This inner hidden and darkened fear
    Is what has brought me back to here.

    If that wasn't the best way to at least end that stanza...I mean WOW Eirisa...GOsh you have no idea how much I miss your poetry..even if its about writing I love it!!! The second stanza was my favorite...you know you kinda inspired me to write a little something something.....Because I realise for a lot of people..they don't write unless something troubling is going on in their life, and you know thats ok for some people..you on the other hand its not good because YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING AND YOU SHOULD NOT STOP! I loved this Eirisa..I tell ya I am a huge fan seriously.....you can write a poem about something so stupid like...say...milk..I bet you 100 moneys that you'd come out with a masterpeice...please do not stop writing girl!! I mean I guesss I'm being selfish when I keep saying "I miss your writing" obviously don't write for me....But uhh..I MISS IS D A M N IT! lol..I love you titta!
    ALways a fan
    Love and miss you forever
    Chelsey-Lynn-Palm
    ^^ oh yes the whole name!

  • 18 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Aww girl .. long time, no read and I loved this one!! It is truly amazing.. Ur awesome and you have a real gift!!!