Very good. i can really feel the emotion of this poem.

That's such a sad poem. I hate how he treats you.

Hey ains omg i love ur poems.. ur one of my bffs!!! luv ya baby. Love Lisa

Very well written this poem has great flow and really portrays a depth of feeling that is often hard to capture on paper. I loved it, keep up the good work. Your now on my fav list.
Tim